Wednesday, 13 June 2012

Writing Snapshot!

My hand went splat onto a metal like object.  It was solid rock freezing my hand to death.  It was thumping rapidly squeezing the palm of my hand which was wedged in and powerless.  I hurled my hand, it was airborne then smacked me firm on the head.  With sudden pain it felt like my knuckles broke in half!

Heath

1 Comments:

At 23 July 2012 at 16:33 , Anonymous Katie said...

Wow some of those words and sentence's were amazing they stood out to me!

 

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